(v0.8) a few typos in Chapter 4
Section 4.3 code block
* Text extends into the right-side margin.
Section 4.6, Paragraph beginning with "The main() function shown above"
* First sentence is a comma-splice. Suggestions: (a) Remove "it" and the comma, or (b) Replace "it" with "and".
Example 4.8
* The "uris.put..." line has some extra indent space
Section 4.8, first code block
* Second line begins with "/" which is probably a typo
Section 4.11, last sentence
* typo - "without having to retrieve and XML response"
* Text extends into the right-side margin.
Section 4.6, Paragraph beginning with "The main() function shown above"
* First sentence is a comma-splice. Suggestions: (a) Remove "it" and the comma, or (b) Replace "it" with "and".
Example 4.8
* The "uris.put..." line has some extra indent space
Section 4.8, first code block
* Second line begins with "/" which is probably a typo
Section 4.11, last sentence
* typo - "without having to retrieve and XML response"
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