I've noticed a few grammatical issues and general poor writing that seems to make it past your editors on a regular basis I thought I'd comment on. I looked at a few popular titles and noted the ones that seem to pop-up frequently.
-I see much overuse of commas. One example is trivia for films and TV shows based on novels. I see many trivia items that start with "In the books, this character did..." There should be no comma after "In the books" because it is an incomplete sentence, a comma shouldn't be used to separate a sentence unless both clauses can stand on their own as a complete sentence. Also if a trivia item is relating to a specific event it should be "In the book" (singular) because obviously an event usually only happens once.
-Numbers under 20 should be spelled out rather than using a numeral. It is the same with place distinctions, e.g. second instead 2nd, unless used in a date.
-Place distinctions should not be used in a date if it is followed by a year. Example: "Character X's birthday is July 3rd." Sure. "The trailer came out on July 3rd, 2015." Should be July 3, 2015.
-Trivia that only communicates half of a thought: "Jennifer Lawrence and Josh Hutcherson stated in an interview that filming this Hunger Games film was different from the first two." That's not interesting, in what ways is it different?
-Sentence starting without needed functional words: "Last film in the series" versus "This is the last film in the series" or just "The last film in the series".
-An ampersand (&) is never used as a conjunction in regular writing.
-When referring to a decade there is no apostrophe (e.g. Titanic is the highest grossing film of the 1990s). An apostrophe indicates possession, e.g. Home Alone was 1990's highest grossing film.
-I see much overuse of commas. One example is trivia for films and TV shows based on novels. I see many trivia items that start with "In the books, this character did..." There should be no comma after "In the books" because it is an incomplete sentence, a comma shouldn't be used to separate a sentence unless both clauses can stand on their own as a complete sentence. Also if a trivia item is relating to a specific event it should be "In the book" (singular) because obviously an event usually only happens once.
-Numbers under 20 should be spelled out rather than using a numeral. It is the same with place distinctions, e.g. second instead 2nd, unless used in a date.
-Place distinctions should not be used in a date if it is followed by a year. Example: "Character X's birthday is July 3rd." Sure. "The trailer came out on July 3rd, 2015." Should be July 3, 2015.
-Trivia that only communicates half of a thought: "Jennifer Lawrence and Josh Hutcherson stated in an interview that filming this Hunger Games film was different from the first two." That's not interesting, in what ways is it different?
-Sentence starting without needed functional words: "Last film in the series" versus "This is the last film in the series" or just "The last film in the series".
-An ampersand (&) is never used as a conjunction in regular writing.
-When referring to a decade there is no apostrophe (e.g. Titanic is the highest grossing film of the 1990s). An apostrophe indicates possession, e.g. Home Alone was 1990's highest grossing film.


