I need to fix the grammar errors on my Bio

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Please fix Bio grammar errors on my Profile

Mira O'Connell
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MiraO

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Posted 6 years ago

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LuvsToResearch, Champion

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Mira, I see that you are credited with writing your own biography. You can go to the page about you, https://secure.imdb.com/signup/resume... , click on the Edit button at the bottom of the page and select to change the biography.
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I rewrote it as this with spelling corrections and punctuation added and submitted it:
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Mira O'Connell was born September 11, 1971 in Amarillo TX.

On July 19, 2002 she survived a near fatal home invasion. Mira later
went on to become a police officer and then a Sergeant. She speaks
publicly to schools, businesses, and organizations nationwide.

She has earned a Bachelors of Science in Occupational Education and
Criminal Justice at Wayland Baptist University. As well as a Masters of
Arts in Business and Security Management from Webster University.
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For explanation I put grammar fixes and a link to this thread. I didn't change the signature of who wrote it since I did not add any new information.

You can add additional information or changes with the edit button as mentioned.
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MiraO

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Thank you 

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